Week 3 Term 3

This week we have been writing stories titled ‘Who do you miss? Some children have bought in photos to help them with this. It could have been a person, animal or thing. Here is a sample of some of the writing.

Who do you miss?

I miss my clever dog called Nina. She is a Rottweiler. We could run fast. She had black and brown hair. She also had green and brown puppy dog eyes. She died from cancer on her leg. The day before she died I gave her a big steak. We were on the couch I was crying so much, Nina was crying too. I wish she was still alive. I still love her.

Tylar  

Who do I miss?

My dog Finn died at the age of 12 she died on April 11 2012. Finn was black and white and really cute! She had brown eyes and lots of fur. I love that she wasn’t that big. The greatest thing about Finn was her wet nose. I liked her wet nose because whenever I went to pat her she would put her nose in front. Her nose was bumpy and her nose was black and hairy.

I’ll never ever, ever stop loving you Finn.

 Lachie